A Comparison of Two Ads
By James B9602089
Source: http://www.2006car.net/pics/mazda¥ð®È¨®.JPG
http://tw.autos.yahoo.com/auto_information_article2/url/d/a/080310/10/1uz9.html
Topic sentence: The two different car ads attract consumers in different ways.
Main Point 1: different sizes
Supporting details: The left car is bigger than the right one. Some people like the left one more because it can store more passengers than the right one. On the other hand, some like the right one more because it is more convenient than the left one by its small size.
Main Point 2: different colors
Supporting details: The color of the left car is black while the right one is white.
Some people like black and some like white.
Concluding sentence: The size, color, and other factors stimuli in the two ads all combine to attract the consumer’s attention.
A Comparison of Two Ads
The two different car ads attract consumers in different ways. We can compare these from the two pictures.
First, the two cars have different sizes. The left car is bigger than the right one. The left can accommodate seven people while the right one can only accommodate two people, but everyone has his or her own opinions. Some people like the left one more because it can store more passengers than the right one. On the other hand, some like the right one more because it is more convenient than the left one by its small size. For example, I like the right one rather than the left one because I prefer the bigger space.
Second, the two cars have different colors. The color of the left car is black while the right one is white. Some people like black and some like white. For example, black is my favorite color, but my sister hates black.
One’s taste is always different from others’. Take the two cars for examples, the size, color, and other factors stimuli in the two ads all combine to attract the consumer’s attention.
By James B9602089
Source: http://www.2006car.net/pics/mazda¥ð®È¨®.JPG
http://tw.autos.yahoo.com/auto_information_article2/url/d/a/080310/10/1uz9.html
Topic sentence: The two different car ads attract consumers in different ways.
Main Point 1: different sizes
Supporting details: The left car is bigger than the right one. Some people like the left one more because it can store more passengers than the right one. On the other hand, some like the right one more because it is more convenient than the left one by its small size.
Main Point 2: different colors
Supporting details: The color of the left car is black while the right one is white.
Some people like black and some like white.
Concluding sentence: The size, color, and other factors stimuli in the two ads all combine to attract the consumer’s attention.
A Comparison of Two Ads
The two different car ads attract consumers in different ways. We can compare these from the two pictures.
First, the two cars have different sizes. The left car is bigger than the right one. The left can accommodate seven people while the right one can only accommodate two people, but everyone has his or her own opinions. Some people like the left one more because it can store more passengers than the right one. On the other hand, some like the right one more because it is more convenient than the left one by its small size. For example, I like the right one rather than the left one because I prefer the bigger space.
Second, the two cars have different colors. The color of the left car is black while the right one is white. Some people like black and some like white. For example, black is my favorite color, but my sister hates black.
One’s taste is always different from others’. Take the two cars for examples, the size, color, and other factors stimuli in the two ads all combine to attract the consumer’s attention.
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